Wednesday, 26 June 2024

Feedback Analysis - UNITS 14 & 16

I have conducted a focus group which has helped me find a guide on what to do, change, edit and adjust for my final edit. 


Mr Magardo had asked me why we were on a road. This had automatically told me it would be hard to understand from the audience's perspective. He then stated that it makes my radio edit sound less professional as the audio of the sound editing of having a crowded background is sort of too overpowering. He advised me to record it clean, meaning to record it with no sound in the background and export the sound effect of a crowded place so that the audio is clearer. He then stated that i should re-record on the microphone using the same tactic meriyem did as she had covered the microphone when recording so there were no harsh pronunciations like Ps and Bs over powering on the mic. 

Zara had stated she likes my radio idea as it is understandable with the sound effects of the cars which makes it recognisable to the public that the characters are outside.She also stated that she thinks i should add more audio to make it three minutes. 

Mr Magardo then talks about the fact that it starts with a character sort of norating but in a studio as it is quiet and professional and then shifts to loud and abrupt sounds that aren't swiftly laid out. Heathen also stated that he believes i cut the ending too soon as it sounded as if the narrator's voice was cut off and then there was just a black screen. 

Questions i asked:

What do you think my strengths are?
  • They said good script 
What is one thing you didn't like at all?
  • The audio needs to be leveled out

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Task Allocation 10 - UNITS 14 & 16